The Descriptive Essay in your portfolio needed to describe this picture (from page 97) and has this criteria:
Concrete words
Sensory imagery
A spatial order.
The picture on page 97 of our text books is very interesting. I'm not quite sure of the meaning of it, but what i see is alot of people at possibly a subway station. The person that stands out the most would be the woman in the red dress and blue jacket. The woman's look in her face shows worry or that she is nervous about something. She is holding her stomach as if she may be pregnant, or have a stomach pain. So my thought is that her water may have possibly broken and she's worried because she has to get to a hospital as quick as possible and it looks as if the three guys that are off to the left in the cubby holes are on the phones or something like that. So maybe she is nervous because she cant use a phone to call the ambulance because they are being used at the moment.
Concrete words
Sensory imagery
A spatial order.
The picture on page 97 of our text books is very interesting. I'm not quite sure of the meaning of it, but what i see is alot of people at possibly a subway station. The person that stands out the most would be the woman in the red dress and blue jacket. The woman's look in her face shows worry or that she is nervous about something. She is holding her stomach as if she may be pregnant, or have a stomach pain. So my thought is that her water may have possibly broken and she's worried because she has to get to a hospital as quick as possible and it looks as if the three guys that are off to the left in the cubby holes are on the phones or something like that. So maybe she is nervous because she cant use a phone to call the ambulance because they are being used at the moment.